Explanations for the amendment process

Officers’ awareness of the amendment process

 

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Notes made by SYP officers regarding the amendment of PC Cammock’s account

Figure 9E: Notes made by SYP officers regarding the amendment of PC Cammock’s account (Source: SYP Archive)

Nature and scale of the amendments

 

Type of suggestionExamples drawn from different accounts
Corrections of fact, grammar, spelling, or style. 
  • on the last line of p3, we think the word “not” is a misprint for “riot”.
  • We think that the quoted serial number 31 is a mistake for 32.
Direct or indirect questions, typically to seek clarification.
  • We wonder if there is a word missing from paragraph 5 on page 9.
  • Comment at page 3 as regards lack of discernible comment from match control: is he saying that there were no messages at all, or that there were messages, but they were too distorted to hear?
Suggestions that a particular word or sentence should be amended. Sometimes, Hammond Suddards provided a possible replacement.
  • I would suggest substitution of the words “extreme urgency” for “panic” on p4.
  • Suggest remove last sentence
Suggestions that sections should be reconsidered or reviewed.
  • Insofar as the references to communications difficulties represent comment, rather than part of the narrative, these could perhaps be reviewed.
  • Suggest he may wish to review the final paragraph.
Observations based on comparisons with other accounts.
  • Could we check whether the reference to 1.15pm on page 2 should really be to 2.15pm which would be more consistent with the other evidence.
  • His perception of the crowd position at page 5 do seem at odds with most other officers but, obviously, this should not be altered if it is his clear recollection. 
Suggestions that a section could be removed.
  • Suggest this ends at “…Mexborough”, i.e. first paragraph on page 8.
  • suggest this ends at off duty on page 3.
Hammond Suddards’ opinion.
  • We should like him to review his criticism of the briefing so as to ensure that this is not exaggerated (page 1). Bearing in mind that the statement is to be submitted to the Public Enquiry and will be on record as such, he may like the opportunity of reviewing some of the language used, although we would not wish to insist on this being changed if he is happy with it.
  • I am not particularly happy about the comment on page 4 about the packing of the terraces. I should like to omit this, unless it has already been accepted in the statements of both Murray and Mr Creaser, copies of which I do not have to hand.

 

The first amendments

 

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Extract from first fax sent as part of the review process

Figure 9D: Extract from first fax sent as part of the review process (Source: Home Office)

WMP’s request for written recollections

The instructions SYP gave about producing recollections

 

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Indexing marks on an officer’s account

Figure 9C: Indexing marks on an officer’s account (Source: SYP Archive)

Meetings regarding the collection of evidence

SYP’s initial actions to investigate and preserve evidence

 

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Litter in a bin outside Hillsborough Stadium at 17.58 on 15 April 1989

Figure 9A: Image of litter outside Hillsborough Stadium, 17.58 on 15 April 1989 (Source: SYP)

 

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Still image taken from SYP video on 17 April 1989, filmed on roads to Sheffield

Figure 9B: Still image taken from SYP video, 17 April 1989, filmed on roads to Sheffield (Source: SYP)

9. SYP’s collection of evidence

What was investigated?

The IOPC investigated:
The actions of police officers and those providing legal advice to police officers in relation to the collection of evidence, in particular:

a) the role of the teams led by Chief Superintendent Terry Wain and Chief Superintendent Donald Denton 
b) the direction given to officers not to complete notebooks or duty statements
c) the process of obtaining handwritten accounts, and the way some of those accounts were subsequently amended, including:

  i) the actions of officers who agreed to amend their accounts 
  ii) the actions of any officer involved in asking them to do so 

d) whether amended accounts were put forward on behalf of any police officer which they had not agreed and/or signed
e) whether the amendments were made in an attempt to deflect blame from the police
 

What was found?

• Some of the earliest actions by SYP to collect evidence after the disaster involved taking photographs of the stadium and areas around it, including of rubbish bins at the Leppings Lane end on the day of the disaster. In the days that followed, other officers collected rubbish along major routes that Liverpool supporters may have taken to Sheffield. These actions appear to have been an attempt to gather evidence about alcohol consumption.

• After the disaster, SYP officers were asked to produce written accounts of their experiences on the day, on plain paper rather than the more familiar approach of producing statements which met Criminal Justice Act 1967 standards. One of these standards is that statements should be factual and should not include opinions (which are generally deemed inadmissible as evidence). When writing their accounts, officers were invited to include their “fears, feelings and observations” and specifically to comment on “the mood of the fans”.

• There is conflicting evidence about whether officers were instructed not to make entries in their pocket notebooks. While some recalled such an instruction, many more did not, and the IOPC found numerous pocket notebooks with entries related to the day.

• Some 327 officers’ accounts were amended before they were submitted to WMP and the Taylor Inquiry. This figure was more than 100 higher than previous reviews of the evidence had found. While some of the amendments were relatively minor, such as correcting spelling or other typographical errors, many resulted in several paragraphs being removed or rewritten.

• The primary justification given by SYP officers and the force’s supporting legal team for the review and amendment of officers’ accounts was to remove opinion or hearsay. While some of the material that was removed did amount to officers’ opinions, the IOPC’s analysis found that a lot of opinion was left in the accounts.

• The decision to review the accounts was made after SYP was asked to submit them to the Taylor Inquiry. SYP had originally asked its officers to provide their accounts as part of its internal investigation into what had happened, with the expectation that WMP would take statements from the officers. However, at a certain point, it was determined that WMP would not take statements from officers.

• Initially, accounts were reviewed by Mr Metcalf, a solicitor who was acting for SYP in 1989–90, who sent his suggested changes to senior police officers. SYP largely treated these suggestions as instructions and amended the accounts. Accounts received later on were reviewed by a team of SYP officers.

• Accounts were sometimes amended without the officers that had written them being told. Some of those who noticed changes that they were not comfortable with were pressured to accept the amended version. Only one officer has stated that he continually resisted that pressure and did not sign an amended version.

• There was a consistent pattern across all reviewers, including the officers as well as Mr Metcalf, of removing or rewording evidence that appeared to criticise senior officers or suggested there had been chaos or a lack of control. Most strikingly, every reference to SYP officers monitoring the crowd in the pens at previous games or taking action to close the tunnel which led to the centre pens once they were full, was removed from officers’ accounts. These were potentially key points of criticism of SYP’s operation on the day of the disaster.
 

Significant new evidence 

The IOPC obtained a range of new evidence in relation to SYP’s collection of evidence. This included:

• three separate videos recorded by members of the SYP Traffic Division on 17 and 18 April 1989, in which they collected empty cans and bottles on main routes to Sheffield that Liverpool supporters could have taken 

• more than 8,000 pocket notebooks from relevant periods, of which 359 were found to include entries related to the disaster

• a telex dated 17 April 1989 and marked from the Chief Constable for the “Information of Chief Superintendents”, which included instructions for officers who had been involved on the day of the disaster to “prepare a note in the form of an aide-memoire – not a statement – of their recollections of what occurred” 

• attendance notes and other documentation held by Hammond Suddards, the firm of solicitors that represented SYP at this stage—this information had been disclosed to the HIP, but only at the very end of its work, so had not been assessed in depth

• statements from many of the officers whose accounts were amended, which covered, among other things, their awareness of the amendment process

 

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