Conduct matters investigated

The trial of Mr Metcalf, Ch Supt Denton and DCI Foster

Explanations for the amendment process

Officers’ awareness of the amendment process

 

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Notes made by SYP officers regarding the amendment of PC Cammock’s account

Figure 9E: Notes made by SYP officers regarding the amendment of PC Cammock’s account (Source: SYP Archive)

Nature and scale of the amendments

 

Type of suggestionExamples drawn from different accounts
Corrections of fact, grammar, spelling, or style. 
  • on the last line of p3, we think the word “not” is a misprint for “riot”.
  • We think that the quoted serial number 31 is a mistake for 32.
Direct or indirect questions, typically to seek clarification.
  • We wonder if there is a word missing from paragraph 5 on page 9.
  • Comment at page 3 as regards lack of discernible comment from match control: is he saying that there were no messages at all, or that there were messages, but they were too distorted to hear?
Suggestions that a particular word or sentence should be amended. Sometimes, Hammond Suddards provided a possible replacement.
  • I would suggest substitution of the words “extreme urgency” for “panic” on p4.
  • Suggest remove last sentence
Suggestions that sections should be reconsidered or reviewed.
  • Insofar as the references to communications difficulties represent comment, rather than part of the narrative, these could perhaps be reviewed.
  • Suggest he may wish to review the final paragraph.
Observations based on comparisons with other accounts.
  • Could we check whether the reference to 1.15pm on page 2 should really be to 2.15pm which would be more consistent with the other evidence.
  • His perception of the crowd position at page 5 do seem at odds with most other officers but, obviously, this should not be altered if it is his clear recollection. 
Suggestions that a section could be removed.
  • Suggest this ends at “…Mexborough”, i.e. first paragraph on page 8.
  • suggest this ends at off duty on page 3.
Hammond Suddards’ opinion.
  • We should like him to review his criticism of the briefing so as to ensure that this is not exaggerated (page 1). Bearing in mind that the statement is to be submitted to the Public Enquiry and will be on record as such, he may like the opportunity of reviewing some of the language used, although we would not wish to insist on this being changed if he is happy with it.
  • I am not particularly happy about the comment on page 4 about the packing of the terraces. I should like to omit this, unless it has already been accepted in the statements of both Murray and Mr Creaser, copies of which I do not have to hand.

 

The first amendments

 

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Extract from first fax sent as part of the review process

Figure 9D: Extract from first fax sent as part of the review process (Source: Home Office)

WMP’s request for written recollections

The instructions SYP gave about producing recollections

 

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Indexing marks on an officer’s account

Figure 9C: Indexing marks on an officer’s account (Source: SYP Archive)

Meetings regarding the collection of evidence

SYP’s initial actions to investigate and preserve evidence

 

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Litter in a bin outside Hillsborough Stadium at 17.58 on 15 April 1989

Figure 9A: Image of litter outside Hillsborough Stadium, 17.58 on 15 April 1989 (Source: SYP)

 

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Still image taken from SYP video on 17 April 1989, filmed on roads to Sheffield

Figure 9B: Still image taken from SYP video, 17 April 1989, filmed on roads to Sheffield (Source: SYP)

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